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Is this good for an opening paragraph of an article I’m writing (Critique needed)?
Posted by georgie on October 3, 2008 in Writing Articles
Love, Peace, Harmony….XOXO asked: During the second world war there were many brave soldiers who lost their lives fighting for their queen and country. Many more would have lost their lives if it wasn’t for a brave few, who against all the odds risked their rank and lives to return the wounded back home to [...]